tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post5584535269779885973..comments2023-04-07T06:10:58.393-07:00Comments on STAR Confession: Joel's storyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-63294899682939648562016-02-26T23:12:14.339-08:002016-02-26T23:12:14.339-08:00Opinion ko lng joel dito din kmi nka tira sa bulan...Opinion ko lng joel dito din kmi nka tira sa bulan sorsogon naawa ako sa kwento mo kaso may ibang part na naiinis para kasing ang gulo ng katon kna ng negusyo tpos now nwala and then parang hindi nmn sa family mo para sayo ng negusyo ka para mpakita sa kay tita na kaya mo. Basta ang gulo d ko ma explain Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08012883072530190997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-73366455120679876032013-05-06T03:33:33.658-07:002013-05-06T03:33:33.658-07:00kung maka ayuf knmn wagas...pero ok lng un wla ski...kung maka ayuf knmn wagas...pero ok lng un wla skin un...kz kung ayuf aq eh anu kpa? Animal ka..........san kb nag aral? sa kalibugan university? un ba ang tinuro ng mga magulang mo sau? kung mag m,umura ka mag pakita ka wag ka magtago. ok?<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-11736216706888055592012-03-17T18:11:40.869-07:002012-03-17T18:11:40.869-07:00walang kwenta natuto kapang sumulat ayuf ka walang...walang kwenta natuto kapang sumulat ayuf ka walang kwentaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-78558634222902210642012-03-10T02:00:44.383-08:002012-03-10T02:00:44.383-08:00ano ba to?ano ba to?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-22881639938663914592012-03-07T08:08:01.152-08:002012-03-07T08:08:01.152-08:00isa lang masasabi ko.. napaiyak mo ko joel.. akala...isa lang masasabi ko.. napaiyak mo ko joel.. akala ko sa sarili ko nahihirapan na ako.. uin pala may isa pang katulad mo na mas malala ang nararanasan sa buhay.. nakaka inspired uing story mo.. eventhough d d2 dapat na publish ang story mo.. 2 thumbs up for youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-66480870709694284322012-02-17T23:08:29.253-08:002012-02-17T23:08:29.253-08:00to joel....salamat at na i share mo sa amin ang yu...to joel....salamat at na i share mo sa amin ang yung buhay.....sa mga ayaw sa story ni joel to lang masasabi ko... (tae kau) bat nyo pa binasa kong ayaw nyo pala....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-77667621600261257812011-12-25T04:08:46.365-08:002011-12-25T04:08:46.365-08:00buhay talaga sala sa init sala sa lamig, minsan ga...buhay talaga sala sa init sala sa lamig, minsan ganun talaga ok lang naman kuento ni joel, tama din ung comment nung isa meron inconsisnetncy sa kuento, tama din ung comment ng iba na boring dahil ang hinahanap nila sa kuento ung sexcapades wala di nila nabasa. minsan kasi ganun ang tao gumagawa ng isang bagay na di naaayon sa lugar pag ganun siguro mas ok na kung wala ka naman maganda sasabihin mabuti pa manahimik na lang. after all di naman siguro big deal ung oras na inubos nyo sa pagbasa ng blog na ito. pag may kausap tayo na iba wag natin i expect na lahat ng sasabihin natin magugustuhan nila or lahat din ng madidinig natin gusto natin. respeto lang ba para every happy or walang away. tama na arguements para sa akin ang best achievment ng isang tao ung mayron kang peace of mind at magkakaron ka lang nun pag natutunan mo ung acceptance and thankfullness, be thankful kung ano meron ka and accept kung ano mga bagay na wala ka and work hard for it. di lahat ng bagay na gusto natin at ayaw natin eh puede makuha or tanggihan. advice lang sa mga blogger kung puede alamin nyo kung sino sino ang mga reader ng blogsite give more emphasis sa parte ng kuento na mag eenjoy sila ikaw ang direktor ng blog mo ung can edit your story the way you like but be considerate to your readers also. un lang po at pasensya na pati ako nakisali na masyado pa late kasi december na ngayon. ngayon ko lang kasi nabasa itong blog na eto and final comment ok lang di sya entertaining di rin ganun kalakas ang impact na puedeng pang maala ala mo kaya pero ung sincerity at honesty ng blogger kahit pano ramdam naman ..... ty po sa uulitinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-45312836321451945642011-12-16T23:43:12.221-08:002011-12-16T23:43:12.221-08:00sang ayon aq sa iyo joel...wag mo silang pansinin....sang ayon aq sa iyo joel...wag mo silang pansinin...inggit lng cla sayo....go...go...lng sa pangarap mo...blang araw...si2kat ka na pla.....dont lose hope..kc may kasabihan..na habang may buhay,may pag asa...pray kita ky GOD...i want u as a friend...f uwant me just tx me...09198214330..tnx..antay aq huh..??nka relate aq tlaga sa story mo...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-13021878092531285782011-09-08T07:22:39.269-07:002011-09-08T07:22:39.269-07:00Okay naman po ang kwento mo. Sana po i-treat mo a...Okay naman po ang kwento mo. Sana po i-treat mo ang comment ko as developmental feedback na pwede mong magamit to improve ang iyong pagsusulat.<br />1. Parang hindi na-review o na-check ang pagkakasula.<br />Kapag ganito kahaba na ang kwento, magandang balikan at basahin muna bago ilathala dahil siguradong maraming salita or sentence na mali ang pagkakasulat. Medyo masakit sa ulo na basahin ang kwento mo kasi ang daming maling spelling at grammar kahit Filipino language ang ginamit mo. Pero sigurado ako na hindi mo sila sinasadya. Sadyang nagkakamali lang paminsan minsan kaya kailangan ng review.<br /><br />2. Walang isang direction ang pagkakalahad ng kwento<br />Medyo hindi masyadong maintidihan kung uurong ba o susulong ang kwento. <br /><br />Halimbawa, nabangit mo na scholar ka ng mayor nung highschool tapos bigla kang bumalik sa topic tungkol sa pagiging model mo ng kabataan.<br /><br />Ayos lang naman iyon, ang tawag dun ay pagbabalik tanaw. Kaso lang marami ka pa palang ikwekwento tungkol sa pagiging model mo. Kaya biglang nalihis at di maintindihan kung ano ang gusto mong i-highlight sa part na iyon: ang pagiging scholar ba o ang pagiging model.<br /><br />3. Nawala ang paksa ng kwento<br />Totoong naikwento mo ang buhay mo, pero nawala ang dahilan kung bakit mo ito isinulat. Nawala ang naging drive at ang intention. Pagdating sa dulo ng kwento, hindi ko naiwasang itanong “okay, then what?” Walang highlight… walang punch line ika nga at higit sa lahat ang layo ng conclusion sa karamihan ng nabanggit sa kwento.<br /><br />Over-all, it is good that you are able to write you life story. But your story will have more meaning if you arranged them the way the topics support each other to highlight the message you want to impart to your readers. Just imagine a book with shuffled chapters. Things written on the book won’t make sense easily until you rearranged them correctly.<br /><br />Also, please don’t forget that another reason we write is to entertain. Therefore, writers should always make sure that their story will not be a “monotone”. A story should have ups and downs just like your life. Up to keep the readers in high mood and down to highlight the “Up” moment.<br /><br />Salamat and I hope to read more stories from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-76573641200871981632011-08-05T04:14:41.870-07:002011-08-05T04:14:41.870-07:00Salamat sa lahat ng mga naka appreciate ng kwento...Salamat sa lahat ng mga naka appreciate ng kwento ko at salamat nadin sa mga nag critic at hnd nila nagustuhanjoel golimlimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-65768795880083571572011-07-27T10:36:20.692-07:002011-07-27T10:36:20.692-07:00kahabaHABA ng kadramahan mo JOEl wlang kwenta!.kahabaHABA ng kadramahan mo JOEl wlang kwenta!.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-72884792649460208232011-07-17T03:35:28.076-07:002011-07-17T03:35:28.076-07:00alam nyo guys...nakakatuwa tong site na tohh...ala...alam nyo guys...nakakatuwa tong site na tohh...alam nyo kong bakit???mas maganda yata kong pangit ung story kasi super haba ng comments dinaig pa ang box office hits..heheh may nagaaway pa ohhh diba naging star agad c JOEL kasi pinagaawayan sya hehehe...nice try guys -;0Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-87914109657932532972011-07-05T19:20:24.959-07:002011-07-05T19:20:24.959-07:00ok lang not much boring,ang mali lang to long to r...ok lang not much boring,ang mali lang to long to read e don lang ang punta sa main point-kahirapan.Best of luck na lang.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-63671741540406789172011-06-29T16:07:30.878-07:002011-06-29T16:07:30.878-07:00joel, boring ang kwento pero nakaka inspired. lots...joel, boring ang kwento pero nakaka inspired. lots of trial pero di ka nag give-up, i love it. <br /><br />wala kang ginawang masama sa kanila. iba kasi expect nila sa site na to. <br /><br />joel, stay as you are, don't mind themAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-1506619636202668112011-06-28T03:40:34.746-07:002011-06-28T03:40:34.746-07:00i felt it and i liked it. im not sure if im liking...i felt it and i liked it. im not sure if im liking u as a person though, but i like the story.<br /><br />"Your story may not have such a happy beginning but that doesn't make you who you are it is the rest of your story who you choose to be.." Soothsayer, Kung Fu Panda 2<br /><br />Sa mga nagcomment ng masama, i can't believe n may mga taong ganyan, oo ur free to leave ur comments but at least try not to be harsh. how immature. lalo n ung nagcomment ng "alam mo kc mga bakla ang nagbabasa d2 kaya dapat ung talagang malilibugan cla at lalabasan pag binasa ang Qwnto mo oky..". how thick cud u get?<br /><br />nwei joel. it's a sad story but nice to read, ive learned a lot. hope u continue moving forward like u always did. (^_^)CAGeDhttp://www.downelink.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-42460280209819371842011-06-27T09:45:19.555-07:002011-06-27T09:45:19.555-07:00u know wat joel..naiiyak ako habang binabasa ko an...u know wat joel..naiiyak ako habang binabasa ko ang story mo,,,im so proud of you...wah kang mawalan ng pag asa darating din yan....god is god all the time.... pray lang.....well gudluck sa maging future mo...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-63104314582147061132011-06-25T10:24:02.116-07:002011-06-25T10:24:02.116-07:00Naku naman hindi nyo xa naintindihan diba gusto ny...Naku naman hindi nyo xa naintindihan diba gusto nyang maging artista? naku drama nang buhay nya.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-64622061563939668272011-06-16T01:35:48.327-07:002011-06-16T01:35:48.327-07:00zzzzzzzzz...............zzzzzzzzz...............Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-69315949293382057802011-06-09T20:30:30.858-07:002011-06-09T20:30:30.858-07:00oo nga!!! ang haba!!!! parang umiikot yung kwento ...oo nga!!! ang haba!!!! parang umiikot yung kwento mo!!! wlang ka thrill2!!! boring!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-87668717836784130282011-05-28T07:45:01.623-07:002011-05-28T07:45:01.623-07:00ang boring!! sna sinamarrize nia boring basahin eh...ang boring!! sna sinamarrize nia boring basahin eh.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-72033955484112481412011-05-27T00:17:27.344-07:002011-05-27T00:17:27.344-07:00http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=10000118920...http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001189207497Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-74262744700084971762011-05-26T05:39:17.424-07:002011-05-26T05:39:17.424-07:00Maraming salamat parin sa mga nag coment sa kwento...Maraming salamat parin sa mga nag coment sa kwento ng buhay ko. yes we have a freedom of speech kya malaya ang bawat isa sa atin mag coment.. Actually nung makita ko ang site na eto na paisip lng ako kya sinubukan ko lng din na e send eto d2 sa site na eto. napadala ko nadin eto sa MMK eto lng din ung ginamit ko d2..sa mga nag comment at nag tangol sa akin maraming salamat...at para dun sa mga nag critic maraming salamat pa din sa inyo. marahil hnd nyo rin nagustuhan ang kwento dahil wlang sex story na nakalagay dto at hndi naka pukaw ng libog ng katawang lupa nyo.joel golimlimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-82693794553859715862011-05-25T12:21:35.017-07:002011-05-25T12:21:35.017-07:00no comment!!!no comment!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-25216876593207591452011-05-24T22:25:09.689-07:002011-05-24T22:25:09.689-07:00hay... ang haba, ang boring naman...hay... ang haba, ang boring naman...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7137497848247834974.post-63878042627040976752011-05-22T23:04:21.852-07:002011-05-22T23:04:21.852-07:00to thE authoR/joeL,
as whAt aNoNymous sAid ( e1...to thE authoR/joeL,<br /> as whAt aNoNymous sAid ( e1 Q LnG kNg cNu jaN),wronG sitE thAt u shArEd or postEd uR LifE expEriencE.u shud kNow whAt is the bEst 4 d reAder.As wHat u sAid, u took up a micRo fiNaNcE, aLam mu kNg aNu aN bgAy nA magu2stuhaN nG tAo.kEa dAtz d rizoN Y most oF d peopLe dEr commeNted somE criticizm..<br /><br /> for my owN, i Like uR stoRy but iF u wNt to shAred diz stoRy to eVerybody.wHy dNt u tRy to send diz to MMK.waLa mAsAmA kNg mAgta tRy kA.,dbA! ngAuN kpA susuko! eH u alreAdy expErieNcE d chaLLengE aNd tRiaL.<br /> good Luck to u!!kyieLnoreply@blogger.com